Your Friday Nifty Experience
Then it got quiet for a while as we both made ‘tents’ in our beds. Then Dan said, ‘let’s compare our dicks’. I could tell that he was getting really excited by the way his jaw shuttered as he spoke. I said, ‘yeah….why not?’
Read “Straight Dan and Me” by mike
2 Comments
Rick
Oct 12, 2010 @ 03:20:21
I really like this story. The dialogue is classic. Just needs a little polish and formatting to make the dialogue pop.
Shorter paragraphs maybe. Aw … I’m too particular I suppose.
Natty
Oct 12, 2010 @ 05:13:50
Yeah, Rick, when it comes to Nifty you sort of take what you can get.